In some large cities, people have to pay a fee when they drive their cars into the city centre, in a policy to reduce the number of cars in the city. Give reasons in support of and opposing this policy, and give your own opinion.

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lead to an increase in
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umber of vehicles.
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, some policies are framed and implemented to reduce the rush of
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cars. Sometimes, people have to pay
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ee when they drive their cars into the
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this
policy has its own pros and cons.
Firstly
, people have to bear the extra fee levied on the entry of their cars to the
city
centre
.
On the contrary
,
this
might help to reduce pollution and crowd from the cities.
Secondly
, people who have a regular job, business etc within the periphery of the
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centre
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. But, they may start to think
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new ideas.
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use of Bi-cycles or electric cycles. On one hand, apart from extra charges, people might have to suffer for other
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essential
services which are easily found in the
city
centre
area. Else, they may have to travel far for these things.
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,
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new prospects in the nearby areas of the
city
. People would be lack of proper opportunities
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but would have more fresh air to breath. For
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example, the odd-even policy
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adopted
by the Delhi government was a success in the past, which was
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similar
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subject. Concluding the facts, the policy of paying
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xtra fee for driving into the
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to reduce the number of cars within the
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is not appreciated as per I opined. Rather, the example of odd-even can be tried for better results.
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