People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society?

Almost everyone desires to live in a perfect

society

. Even though

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people had already made many attempts

towarding

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toward

towards

to an ideal public, we have not succeeded to form the

society

regarded flawless. In my opinion, an ideal

sociaty

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society

is a place where people do not offend crime, and educating children from their young age is the solution to achieve the purpose.

Firstly

, nations whose incarnational rates are low get regarded as one of the happiest countries in the world.

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does not have criminals, meaning nothing

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does not have criminals, meaning anything

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to worry about,

also

confining miscreants in prisons, which is fatal to the government' financial power. Wealthy nations have

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ow law-breaking

rate

.

For instance

, countries

such

as

Swetzerland

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Switzerland

, Norway, and Finland are well-known for their low criminal

rate

and richness so that they nominated as one of the

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happiest countries in the world according

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world happiness index conducting

this

research every year.

On the other hand

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Sudan, Afghanistan, and Rwanda were named the

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unhappiest nations to live, as they are poor and present

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xtremely high crime

rate

.

Hence

, low-crime

rate

and affluence are the main

critiria

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criteria

used to indicate happiness.

Secondly

, educating children from their young age and supervising them, which are effective approaches to create an ideal

society

. If we see delinquents' biographies, they were not informed about ethics and moral values in their young ages

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and were not looked after their

gurdians

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guardians

.

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they become culprits in the future, so the government should start

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educate every child said police chief Rayleigh once

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a TV.

Thus

, teaching moral ethics to every single kid, which is the best way to achieve an ideal

society

. In conclusion, I view an ideal

society

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Finland, Norway, Sweden and

Swetzerland

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Switzerland

, affluent and have

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a

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ow-crime

rate

. To perform a perfect public the government should educate people from their young age.