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Recent technological developments have greatly changed our ways of life in a positive way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Modern technology is creating a single planet civilization.
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 is because it is now much easier to communicate with people who are far away,Satelite Television,modern transportation and the internet have all brought people closer together.people the nature over share the same sources of information and
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 leads to the creation of single
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 perception. BecauseTV broadcast by satellite,Television programs can be received anywhere in the
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.Now people in every part of the earth can have access to all the same Television programs,Everybody knows that TV is the biggest cultural influences there is .When people everywhere see the same news ,educational and entertainment programs,they move toward the development of single dust fashion . Because modern methods of transportation are fast ,a trip to a faraway place becomes easy.People from all different places are together more now than they ever were before.They can see how people in other countries dress,eat,and spend their time.People have more exposure to customs from other countries and might start adopting some of those customs.
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 contributes to the development of a single earth fashion . Modern communication technology has brought people from all around the
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 closer together .People these days have more and more opportunities to share ideas and information.In
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 way,they are coming more and more under the same cultural influence A single
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 ability is being created .
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