Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

The changes in
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society and the need for fast
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has led to people to prefer
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ar than public
transport
. The increase in population and availability of different services like cab, rental cars lead to a comfortable lifestyle.
This
transport
method and services has brought a great difference in our daily life.
Firstly
, people had to find
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public
transport
to travel from one place to another. But recent days
this
trend has changed. The various advertisement and payment plan for buying cars
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become an opportunity for every individual to live a standard life.
For example
, during the early days when
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utomobile was
first
introduced, they were mostly owned by wealthy people. Whereas nowadays it is possible for anyone to own a car for transportation.
Secondly
,
this
ownership has made people handle
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mergency situation on time.
For instance
, in the late
80’s
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, people had to use public
transport
in case of
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edical emergency which sometimes led to not reaching the hospital on time. But in today’s scenario
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individuals use their own
transport
facility in case of
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mergency to reach the destination on time.
This
system has brought a greater change, but they have their own drawbacks. Though
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overnment has brought
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ifferent measure to reduce private
transport
, people tend to prefer private
transport
. Some improvement can be made in the availability and comfort in public
transport
.
Thus
, it is important for developing
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better public
transport
system up to a standard in accordance with the need and development, which ultimately attract people to use public
transport
.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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