One of the consequences of improving medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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the field of medical

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has drastically evolved. The numerous research studies and their successful result helped the society to improve the standards of medical

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. Like the recent development in

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uman genome project and

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analysis made a great impact in helping scientist to design drugs with high accuracy with

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side effects.

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change led to the cure diseases, protection against infections leading to a healthy lifestyle, as an ultimate outcome the life expectancy

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increased. The life expectancy is the average age a human can live in a population. As the technological innovations in med-

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led to

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reater understanding of

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esponse of our body to

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example, a recent study named

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medical coding mainly focused on the storage of medical data and reports in

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omputer over a long period of time. Becoming a pathway to analyse clinical errors, improved diagnosis and test reports. Some of the drawbacks

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that in certain case people get immune to

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ertain

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used for curing a disease. Scientist experiment and explained that when a person is exposed to certain

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eriod of time, their cell function might get immune to

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rug resulting in

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risis. With the increase of technology and ideology of medical

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they cost of

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increasing, which result as

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roblem to people below poverty line creating an unbalance in society.

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the medical

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improved in every part of

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ield like

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and diagnosis which results to extend the life expectancy. It is important to ensure that the government implement rules and regulations which facilitates the availability to people of all range and sector.