In some countries few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think this is good for the country, while other believe that government should control the salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Earning surged salaries is satisfying for all. In some nations handful of people get a high amount of salary. Few people think that
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overnment should restrict the salary bar and control the number of people who can earn. Here I would articulate my view over the thought process where higher salaries
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a boon for the country. People earning higher salaries will fetch
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ood amount of taxes and spending.
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society to aspire and achieve. High paying jobs are a reciprocation of the expertise provided by the employee in a certain job.
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, the specific stream where these high paying individuals works in will
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will be benefitted at large in terms of
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ducation sector as people aspiring would want to become one through the pathway studying the specific subject. Example - IT sector in AI has
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a lot of momentum as it high paying jobs which
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created a shift in students towards
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some people want the government to fence down the salary bar and restrict the number of people who can earn. In
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scenario, people would be mutually considerate but totally claw
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to their regular salaries. People won'
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even dream of earning higher wages and wouldn'
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ever expect the right value of the expertise.
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certain criteria that will create biasness and people won'
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earn much,
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would straightaway impact and influence the ex-chequer of the country. GDP wouldn'
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surge and service industry won'
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be able to contribute at large. I would always go with the fact that extremely high salaries will always contribute to the government and it will bring prosperity and wealth in every aspect of the nation, implicitly and explicitly as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wealth inequality
  • economic growth
  • motivation
  • talent acquisition
  • consumer spending
  • tax revenue
  • redistributing wealth
  • market forces
  • income disparity
  • social stability
  • freedom of choice
  • meritocracy
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