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Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Plastic
 shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree? A lot of environmental problems are caused by the wide usage of
plastic
 bags,
hence
, some people consider that those bags ought to be prohibited. In my opinion, they have a negative effect on landfills and the seas,
however
, the replacements for
plastic
 bags
also
 carry significant environmental risks,
that is
 why I think that
plastic
 bags should not be bunned.
To begin
, the main environmental side effect caused by
plastic
 bags is the earth and water contamination. An insignificant percentage of people may reuse them, but most would simply litter or throw them in the trash. If individuals continue to throw
plastic
 bags in the trash, they will turn to an ever-increasing number of landfills and contribute to soil pollution.
For example
, the ones that are simply thrown on the street tossed into clog drains after that find their way to the sea and entangle marine life. Another view is that if
plastic
 bags would be prohibited a harmful effect from biodegradable products. Most people suggest that paper bags and reusable bags made from cotton are the best solutions,
however
, these remedies are even worse. Paper bags require us to continue clearing forests,
besides
, reusable bags are plagued by similar problems. Independent studies have shown that the production of cotton and reusable
plastic
 causes more harm to the environment than disposable bags due to factories' exhausts. In conclusion, owing to broadly usable
plastic
 bags nature snowed under many problems; some people support the idea to restrict those bags.
Plastic
 bags are the main reason for landscape and water contamination,
however
, I think that if
plastic
 bags would be bunned the side effects for nature will be even worse,
hence
, they should not be prohibited.
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