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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet, and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

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Today, the people around the world can shop, work, and communicate via the
internet
, and they live without actual meeting with others. The advantage of
this
 condition is the people can connect to the others by a heap
price
, while the disadvantage is low meeting
quality
.
However
, the connection by cheap
price
 is more important than the low meeting
quality
 because the cheap
price
 of connection can make the increasing of economic rapidly. The
internet
 can be used to connect all people in the world by cheap
price
 because the people must not move to the other place to meet the other people by transportation equipment which needs much fuel, so the people only need a gadget and
internet
 provider to connect the people from the other place to do shopping, working, and communication.
For example
, the people in Indonesia can shop
a
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cloth from America using
internet
 services without going to America.
On the other hand
, the meeting using
internet
 services will produce a low
quality
 of meeting because the meeting is not facing to face, so the bonding effects of the actual meeting is higher than the bonding effect of video call by an
internet
 service application.
For instance
, the children will feel happy when they meet their parents, and they will get some loss when they only see their parents by an application of video call. To sum up,
although
 the virtual meeting via
internet
 services only produce a low
quality
 of the meeting, the
internet
 can make a big benefit.
This
 benefit is cheap connection so the economy can grow quickly because the trading can cover all the people.
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