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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 

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Many of us believe that leadership is an inherent quality that
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 those who think
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 can learn to be a good
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. A
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, for me, is the
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 who not only has the ability to guide and direct those who follow
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 but is
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 able to inspire them.
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 could be born with the qualities of a good
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 and
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 could
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 learn to be a good
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 through
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’s own life experiences. A
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 by birth would be quick at thinking about resolutions to trickiest of situations, directing people on how to move ahead and inspire those who follow in the process. Examples to
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enaissance period and various personalities who started revolutions around the world and paved the way towards peace and harmony. The leaders who are born with these qualities,
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 keep improving themselves with each experience they have in life.
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 those, who learn and imbibe the qualities of their
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, work on themselves and learn from their failures and mistakes and eventually become a
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 for many others.
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, entrepreneurs and businessmen who succeed after many failed attempts. I believe that both these scenarios are possible,
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 could be a
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 by birth or strive to be a
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 by continuously learning from
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’s experiences and improving oneself. It is a completely self-driven process.
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