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Some people think that children should obey the rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Some people think that children controlled very much cannot deal with problems themselves.

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It is important for parents to navigate and guide their children for the betterment of kids future. Some people believe offsprings should be bound within rules of their mentors and parents, while I would argue that kids should be enforced with strict rules and continuously monitored, but that not restrict them from thinking independently. Every generation wishes their children to lead
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icturesque life than them with more comfort and luxury. In the process of journey
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elders support and provide guidance to youth to establish their life. Until certain age kids have less ability to think about future consequences so parents decide everything including school, food, clothes, and kids will follow their
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 words. After
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adolescence
 they should have some opportunities to think on their own.
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 is crucial for youth to decide based on their interests rather than parents or teachers likings.
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 and parents force their children to be a pro in all fields like sports, studies, dance, singing and many more. These thinkings
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 parents feel they are providing all possible options to their child but at
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ame time it's restaining kid to improve on the field which he likes.
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, I was not good at singing
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 painting but my parents tried hard to make me a singer rather than providing additional coaching related to arts. In conclusion,
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 it is prominent for parents to control their kids they should not limit the
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 options to think. In my view, after certain age children should decide on their future with little support from parents.
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