When a country develops its Technology the traditional skill and ways of life die out. It is pointless to I and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Technological development has considerable impact on people's lives. It is argued that human work. which was performed by humans before technological advancement.
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traditional approaches and ways of life of a country has vanished it is also
said that maintain them is meaningless. I fully agree with this
notion and this
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Firstly
, technology
has become spread all over the world. It can be seen that many advanced countries use technology
in their various sector. Machines are more usable rather than humans. The machine could do more faster, better and it also
takes less time than humans. In this
regard, we can follow a report about the Japanese industrial sector where robots can do 75%Verify preposition usage
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Thus
technological innovations have resulted in vanishing traditional capabilities.
secondly
, technology
has enormously changed people's lifestyles. Such
as the communication pattern. If anyone wants to interact with another, there no need to meet face to face. It has become possible due to technology
. In this
way, people meet easily with friends and family far from abroad. It takes less time to meet. Also
, people like to meet on internet-related applications like Facebook, messenger, what's app etcetera. They can easily access massage, video call, and audio call within a short time. Those are only possible for technology
.Therefore
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In conclusion, it is said that owing to the technological flourishing old skill and ways of living have been disappearing. In my point of view, I completely agree with Add an article
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this
statement that in the technological world no need for manual labor
as well as preserve traditional skills.Change the spelling
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