Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. to what extend do you agree, give your own opinion

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orld has been divided into two parts in developing countries and
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more debatable when the topic comes to spend money on improvements in health education and trade. I vigorously believe that richer
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should help the poorer
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to improve their infrastructure. In my range, I will give some opinion
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the poorer
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to build their education system and better quality of human resources.Because developed countries have
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resources than pooer countries.
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ustralian government give scholarship to Indonesian citizen in
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tudy so they will gather many
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and they will have more
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they will have a strong network to other countries. After finishing their study , they will back to their country and could involve in
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ector what they have learnt.
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, infrastructure should be made in
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local people can go somewhere and can do some economic work.
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rant from developed countries is very essential for poorer countries in long run.
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ooer citizen can feel that they are
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. They might hesitate to do some social work as the need. They might fully depend on government like collect their passport, medical insurance, various types of licence
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. To sum up, it is very good to have
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rant from developed countries. Because in
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way poorer countries will become more developed in many areas and can update the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • underdeveloped nations
  • economic disparity
  • global cooperation
  • moral obligation
  • historical exploitation
  • interconnected world
  • economic stability
  • quality of life
  • trade relationships
  • humanitarian aid
  • capacity building
  • dependency syndrome
  • sustainable development
  • bilateral agreements
  • economic priorities
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