Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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watching movies on gadgets at
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no need to go
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to the
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easy,we will discuss both sides. I personally watch movies at
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because it is easy to watch it at any time.
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, it can be seen with family members with snacks too. Watching movies at
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is much cheaper
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I paid $5 every month for Netflix and enjoy it for the whole month.
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, if you are watching something and suddenly you got some work to do you can pause or stop it that moment and continue it with some other time. And most importantly you can spend a lot
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of time with family.
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, going theatres for films are much more fun than at
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. I usually went with my friends to meet up there and watch movies. It makes movies more interesting, fun and enjoyable to watch it on hug screen without any pause.
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we had dinner and
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we came to my
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and watch their film too. In conclusion, it is fine to watch movies the way you like. In my opinion
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I like both ways of watching movies at
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and cinema. As it depends on humour and to whom you are watching .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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