Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea the women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been either father or mother. some people the children will not able to face the hurdles they have in their life's. compare to the ladies have some physical problems due to various type of reasons. As
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, men's have only responsibility to feed their families. After stable in their job or business , they want to expand their families. For instance
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so that they deny to take the responsibilities. As man
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they want to grow up their families so they deserve more parenthood than women.Correct your spelling
responsibility
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,
this
reason they can not contribute themselves in family properly. For example
, after giving birth the child they loses
their body strength.
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