In many countries, a small number of people are able to purchase very expensive luxurious products. Some people believe that this is good for the economy, but others think that governments should not allow products above a certain price level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Given the economic situation in many countries, most citizens cannot afford expensive things. Some believe

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can be bad for the economy,

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others consider it understandable. In my opinion, governments must allow stores to sell items of luxury despite their high price. On the

one

hand, approving expensive products to be on market helps the

economy

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growth, as luxury brands are desirable and that makes people put an effort to buy them.

Furthermore

, it helps

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keeping

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industries investments when they see a country as a good place to make money.

For instance

, selling

high quality

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clothes, bags, watches, and jellewery, attract rich people,

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is great for market value.

On the other hand

, expensive items can make difference between

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another, sometimes affecting people social lives, as they can feel less important because they do not wear exclusive brands or unique items,

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Moreover

,

one

might be sad to not have enough cash to reach these things, and worse than that, to believe they are not

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good as people as who has it. In conclusion, governments

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to decide what can be sell in

one

country, whether products are expensive or not. I believe that allowing luxury brands is good for

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conomy as it helps in many ways. Given the economic global crisis, every business should be considered.