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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination. Others think money and appearance are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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It is believed by someone that, success can be achieved by doing hard
work
 and devotion. while some others believe that
money
 and manifestation rather significant.
This
 essay intends to discuss both the view. I firmly believe that hard
work
 and determination is more important.
Firstly
, to achieve success a
person
 must have to
work
 hard and have an intention. To elaborate Behind the success of any career, there would be an enormous hardship of mankind either physical or psychological.
secondly
, with the hard shipment If attaining accomplishment that would remain forever.
for instance
, for some of the film actor, they are acting like originally ready to take the risk not only for themselves but for the entire team.
However
, while hard-working one
person
 can become successful as well rich.
On the other hand
,
money
 and appearance are
also
 crucial in some way.If the
person
 has
money
 there would be many friends and relatives,if nothing no one would be there.If the
person
 is rich there is fame in society. To conclude,I firmly believe that making
money
 with hard
work
 and determination would give a better physical appearance for a
person
.
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