Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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developing depends on valid exams,

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the idea that continuing evaluation

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as assignments is a better method to do so. In my opinion,

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students through exams

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the best option since it is possible to verify what the students have learned along the

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year.

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, evaluating students by exams avoid frauds to come up. Considering that the internet

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about thousands

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works on

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online, which can be helpful for those who tackle lack of time when attending classes, it can be difficult do identify if a student

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an assignment by themselves.

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, the only

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supervision

of the institution. To illustrate, several websites offer complete work to be used as assignments which all the student have to do is to put their name on it so that the institution will never know who really did the job.

Secondly

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students through a test is the only

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to measure their knowledge. When enrolling a test the

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students

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to show what they really know, which helps them to understand their weakness in some aspects on each subject.

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method is ultimately the best option to

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the students to the

year, which will avoid students from different levels to attend the same class in the future.

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, a great portion of universities in the world only

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new students by analysing their results after taking a specific test which

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that

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is the best manner to accept only the best ones. In conclusion, I totally agree that the best

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what the students have learned is through regular tests, which is the only

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that all the content taught was

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by the learners.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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4 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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