Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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is commonly believed by some that
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developing depends on valid exams,
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the idea that continuing evaluation
such
as assignments is a better method to do so. In my opinion,
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evaluating
students through exams
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the best option since it is possible to verify what the students have learned along the
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school
year.
Firstly
, evaluating students by exams avoid frauds to come up. Considering that the internet
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about thousands
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works on
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online, which can be helpful for those who tackle lack of time when attending classes, it can be difficult do identify if a student
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an assignment by themselves.
Therefore
, the only
way
to provide authenticity to evaluating all
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spreadsheet
is by enrolling presential tests with
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supervision
of the institution. To illustrate, several websites offer complete work to be used as assignments which all the student have to do is to put their name on it so that the institution will never know who really did the job.
Secondly
,
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examining
students through a test is the only
way
to measure their knowledge. When enrolling a test the
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students
are
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required
to show what they really know, which helps them to understand their weakness in some aspects on each subject.
Thus
,
this
method is ultimately the best option to
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the students to the
next
year, which will avoid students from different levels to attend the same class in the future.
For instance
, a great portion of universities in the world only
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admit
admits
new students by analysing their results after taking a specific test which
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displays
that
this
is the best manner to accept only the best ones. In conclusion, I totally agree that the best
way
to
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acknowledge
what the students have learned is through regular tests, which is the only
way
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that all the content taught was
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absorbed
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by the learners.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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