Some say that university students must only learn science and technology. While others believe that they should learn what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whilst some argue that every student in the

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should choose only

science

and technology as a

subject

, others hold that they should opt the subjects as per their interests. I reckon that pupils in the universities should read and learn subjects as per their interest. Both views will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost, with the advent of latest technologies and innovations human's life

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become much easier than what was before.

As a result

, demands for employees with the knowledge of

science

has increased steeply and there are

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lethora of

job

options for them with lucrative offers.

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, every guardian

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their children to learn these subjects for

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better future

job

perspectives.

For instance

, studies show that approximately 90% of students with the

science

degree received a

job

offer within a year of their graduation while other

subject

students had to wait for 3-4 years. On contrary, according to others

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student should have the freedom to read and learn any

subject

of their choice.

Furthermore

, making any

subject

compulsory would put

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extra pressure on the students who are not interested in those subjects.

As a result

, their performance will be hampered. To exemplify, it has been found in the latest studies that students who have selected their

subject

of interest in the graduation are much

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happier and are doing much better in their fields as compared to those who were forced to choose subjects. To conclude,

although

students with degrees in

science

and technology are having more

job

options with big offers, they should not be forced to learn any

subject

they

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nterest,

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their performance will be decreased significantly.