In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

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In many parts of the United States, teenagers cannot go outdoors without adult supervision during the late hours of the
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due to the imposition of a ‘curfew’. In my opinion,
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step robs them of their basic human right to move about freely and could even affect their confidence levels in adulthood.
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with, being able to go outdoors is a constitutional right of all humans guaranteed by the US constitution. Preventing young people from going out at
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without a parent or guardian is a bit like stripping them of that basic right. Of course, being out at late hours can pose many threats to the safety of teens.
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, stopping them from venturing out is hardly the solution to
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problem.
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, parents and teachers should make children aware of the vicious crimes
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as looting, rape, kidnapping and substance abuse that are prevalent during the
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hours. When children are equipped with the knowledge, they will be able to better safeguard themselves and can be safely outdoors at any hour of the day or the
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, going out with an adult is not always a feasible option especially since many children have parents or caretakers who work late
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, teenage children of doctors, nurses, paramedics and 24-hour store employees are usually alone at
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. If these children want to go out at
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, it is not always easy for them to find a familiar adult who can accompany them.
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can put them in trouble if they have urgent errands to run or late-
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parties to attend. Even returning home alone from a friend’s or relative’s place at
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can put them in trouble and
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situations have to be avoided. To summarise, in my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to go outdoors at
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. They should be empowered with knowledge and technology so as to safeguard themselves from sticky situations. These steps will not only make them independent and confident but
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give them the freedom to make their own choices in life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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