Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Human
life
is full of suspense and experiences. Few believe there is nothing to learn from past days while
other
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see past days as a
path way
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for the future. In my opinion, history provides a safe guideline to the future. I shall describe the details in the essay.
Firstly
, people are busy with
day
today
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life
and
gets
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limited time to rework and analyse on what has been completed.
For example
, a software engineer works for more than 8 hrs a
day
while they finish their works, they are really tired to look back and find an accomplishment and its usages.
In other words
, every
day
comes up with new tasks where previous
day
task is of least preference and priority to today's activity.
Moreover
, the time constraint for each work keeps them occupied with less time to preview on
last
day
actions.
Nevertheless
,
information
is always a vital source
in
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human
life
. For an illustration, doctors gain knowledge on
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isease and cure through books that
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recorded with the experience and practice. Unless
,
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these
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information
were not
troved
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proved
provided
the
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every trial and error would have taken
thousand
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of
life
's leading to the controversy of medicine and science development.
Moreover
, it would have been far away from today's establishment.
In addition
, all the
information
collected, recorded and shared in every
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are a reference guide which is meant to be taken forward in
r
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ight direction to avoid mistakes and faults. In conclusion, history is an important source of
information
owing
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the advantages more than disadvantages to human
life
.
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