Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your letter, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Shoaib, I hope you're doing well, I'm writing to thank you for asking for my recommendation for a sport. Since we've been friends for the

last

couple of years, let me admit that you're a great admirer of cricket, so I will suggest it to you. To start with,

First,

there is an academy in our locality that has a renowned former cricketer as an instructor, who is quite fluent in English, definitely,

this

is gonna be much convenient for you.

Then

, the coaching centre, which is modern, and spacious, has a ton of positive feedback, and people love its ambience.

Finally

, for all trainees, they provide a free kit including a tracksuit, helmet, gloves, pad, and safeguards.

Moreover

, I've been looking for a companion, so that I can foster my batting skills. In fact, I paid multiple visits there, but couldn't continue just because of the lack of someone whom I'm familiar with.

Therefore

, I'll be joining you in gound to embark on my cricketing journey with you. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Haris

Submitted by Haris Khan on Thu Dec 21 2023

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task achievement

Although the response is complete, provide more specific details to fully satisfy the task requirement such as explaining how your friend can learn the sport.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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7 paragraphs

180 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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