Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your letter, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together

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Dear Shoaib, I hope you're doing well, I'm writing to thank you for asking for my recommendation for a sport. Since we've been friends for the
last
couple of years, let me admit that you're a great admirer of cricket, so I will suggest it to you. To start with,
First,
there is an academy in our locality that has a renowned former cricketer as an instructor, who is quite fluent in English, definitely,
this
is gonna be much convenient for you.
Then
, the coaching centre, which is modern, and spacious, has a ton of positive feedback, and people love its ambience.
Finally
, for all trainees, they provide a free kit including a tracksuit, helmet, gloves, pad, and safeguards.
Moreover
, I've been looking for a companion, so that I can foster my batting skills. In fact, I paid multiple visits there, but couldn't continue just because of the lack of someone whom I'm familiar with.
Therefore
, I'll be joining you in gound to embark on my cricketing journey with you. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Haris
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear, central idea and avoid mixing multiple ideas within a single paragraph for greater clarity.
task achievement
Although the response is complete, provide more specific details to fully satisfy the task requirement such as explaining how your friend can learn the sport.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advice
  • recommend
  • suitable
  • learn
  • coach
  • lessons
  • tutorial videos
  • practice
  • tennis club
  • group
  • schedule
  • regularly
  • participants
  • tournaments
  • friendly matches
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