There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting the public suggest what changes could be made

Dear Sir or Madam , I am writing

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letter to report some problems faced by the community of Happy Garden in regard to the local public transportation system. The only available transport allocated to the public here is the FX

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with plate number 1234. As Happy Garden is located in the suburbs where very few people own a car, it makes the community solely rely on the

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for transportation. For the past week, the

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schedule has been delayed. To top it off, the

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is not in a good condition given the torn seats and broken handles

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, people have been late

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work and school.

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during the rush hour, it came to my attention that few passengers were injured due to the faulty handle. To resolve

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matter, we hope that the public transport company could look into these issues and strictly monitor the

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schedule. Apart from

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we do kindly request an upgrade to the

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condition making it friendly and safe for both adults and children. Thank you for your kind cooperation. Yours sincerely, Sam Jones