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Some people believe that students should be taught international news as a subject at school. Others feel that this would be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent times, there are discussions
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whether to include worldwide news as
part
 of the academic curriculum is worthwhile or is it not a proper way to utilize the time.
This
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part
 of the student’s syllabus. Since the advent of the internet, there is a
constent
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constant
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lobalized talent search, so having multinational news as
part
 of the curriculum will be boon to pupils to pick a skill which provides value and
opputunity
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opportunity
. A study by GlobalHire magazine states that, as there is a steady decrease
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 population rate in many developed nations, they will look highly skilled immigrants from
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part
 of worlds to steer up their economy.
Additionally
, exposure to
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provide
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 the students
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 glance of different flavours of culture and traditions makes them visit different places in future which in turn be
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helpful
 in the growth of travel and tourism.
However
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some masses feel that
this
 news be not worthy of students time. According to them, students are already exposed to outside news through social media, having that as
part
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 them as the syllabus is getting tougher year by year.
Although
 they some positivity through great intercontinental news
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it been overshadowed by bad news which will
instill
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 their mind with negativity and fear. To conclude,
although
 some individuals prefer adding global news as a section in student’s learning, there are some masses who feel it is
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improper usage of student’s time, personally
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the former notion surpasses the latter in
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