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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It seems that people are disabled to enhance the environment wellbeing,
furthermore
, only governments and significant companies can bring changes. I disagree that individuals not contributing to nature developing because overall success depends on each person,
although
 governments and companies
also
 have their contribution.
To begin
, the global improvement relies on each individual rather a
government
. Everybody is a part of a great mechanism that calls society. If
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an wants to eliminate the quality of the environment, only working together will bring positive results despite all odds.
For example
, in Australia, when it comes to typhoon time a lot of litter
such
 as plastic bags, glass bottles, and paper were stacked on the seashore,
however
, the
government
 did anything to get rid of contamination.
Besides
, one warmhearted individual decided to do rather wait for the parliament's actions, and he assembled local people together in volunteer groups which during one week cleaned from the garbage whole area.
However
, a
government
 and many big companies are able to contribute to nature improvement too. The state has the power to ask and, if needed, force people to do anything,
therefore
, it seems easier to engage more people with help of the
government
.
In addition
, big companies, due to their wealth of resources and money, may lessen many environmental problems,
however
, need to notice that in both cases the individual's desire is the key point. If there no willingness from a person, neither ministry nor authoritative companies can do anything. In conclusion, it appears that only governments and big companies have the power to deal with environmental problems, whereas individuals can do nothing to develop the greenhouse. I disagree with
this
 statement because without people's desire cannot be done anything.
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  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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