In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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housework
equally, regardless of their gender, so that it is fair, as both male and female employee work
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diligently
in many nations.
In contrast
, certain groups of people oppose and affirm only women should do chores while labouring as usual. I reckon ladies are obliged to
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housework
more than gentlemen.
First
of all, I view women have a duty to look after their children and family, as females were assigned to deal with the inner part of
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ouse, in obligations
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as cooking, cleaning, and raising their babies, while males coped with
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uter part of their homes, duties including hunting, protecting their household from others, and earning basic needs, since human-beings started existing in the world.
For instance
, all men I know make a living and earn money in my country, and I see it as a natural
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phenomenon
.
Hence
, women should
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up their homes for
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balaced
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balanced
balance
life.
Secondly
, it is inevitable fact that strong women are behind all successful and vibrant men, meaning a man can not live
happiliy
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happily
, victorious, and fortunate without a woman and her support, as a wife inspires a husband when he gets despaired.
Besides
this
, they are able to do anything for their husbands.
For example
, the wife of Curry, a well-known basketball player, cooks 3 times a day
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and delivers meals by herself to Curry's workplace.
Thus
, I presume
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oman's essential role is to empower their men. In conclusion, from the ideas and examples given, I firmly believe
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oman's duty is to maintain the stability of a family and assist his husband
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triumph.
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