In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Numerous characters deem people in business should do
houseworks
equally, regardless of their gender, so that it is fair, as both male and female employee work Correct your spelling
housework
deligintly
in many nations. Correct your spelling
diligently
In contrast
, certain groups of people oppose and affirm only women should do chores while labouring as usual. I reckon ladies are obliged to houseworks
more than gentlemen.
Correct your spelling
housework
First
of all, I view women have a duty to look after their children and family, as females were assigned to deal with the inner part of h
ouse, in obligations Add an article
the
such
as cooking, cleaning, and raising their babies, while males coped with o
uter part of their homes, duties including hunting, protecting their household from others, and earning basic needs, since human-beings started existing in the world. Add an article
the
For instance
, all men I know make a living and earn money in my country, and I see it as a natural phenomenom
. Correct your spelling
phenomenon
Hence
, women should tidying
up their homes for Change the verb form
tidy
be tidying
the
Remove the article
apply
balaced
life.
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balanced
balance
Secondly
, it is inevitable fact that strong women are behind all successful and vibrant men, meaning a man can not live happiliy
, victorious, and fortunate without a woman and her support, as a wife inspires a husband when he gets despaired. Correct your spelling
happily
Besides
this
, they are able to do anything for their husbands. For example
, the wife of Curry, a well-known basketball player, cooks 3 times a day,
and delivers meals by herself to Curry's workplace. Remove the comma
apply
Thus
, I presume w
oman's essential role is to empower their men.
In conclusion, from the ideas and examples given, I firmly believe Add an article
a
w
oman's duty is to maintain the stability of a family and assist his husband Add an article
a
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