People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve the problems?

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day and age, after being retired, people tend to have longer expectancy, and

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seems to be as a new problem for

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society. There are many matters

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I will give some possible measures to deal with these negative problems. There are several reasons why

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lderly can be seen as a

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of urban society. It is simply because after being retired, they cannot make money anymore so they have to depend on the

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from the

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and salary of their offspring.

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of all, the

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have to spend a lot of financial budget for the

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for retired people,

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live too long can waste too much money as well as some necessary services

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as healthcare or remission in taxes. And that makes

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lderly become the financial

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of the society.

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, retired people who have high longevity can

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be the

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of their own family.

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by completely depending on their offspring’s salary for

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daily life’s expenses. Because elderly are able to cause a lot of different illness and do not have the strength to do everything like before so their offspring have to take care of

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, some possible measures can be given to solve these problems.

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, the efforts

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can be seen as the main measures. The

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should raise the taxes for retired people in order to balance the income and outcome as well as raise the

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age from 5 to 7 years. Because of the development of

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ealthcare system nowadays, people have longer expectancy and become healthier, so raising retired age can reduce the proportion depending on

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ension.

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, families should have different actions

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as giving elderly some gentle job to do while they still can work.

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measure can help elderly not feel bored and

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help their offspring

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some parts in daily life. In conclusion, the

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on the family and

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is an unavoidable problem that will happen when people live longer after they retire.

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, there are several appropriate approaches mentioned to deal with these problems.