People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve the problems?

In

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day and age, after being retired, people tend to have longer expectancy, and

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society. There are many matters

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I will give some possible measures to deal with these negative problems. There are several reasons why

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lderly can be seen as a

burden

of urban society. It is simply because after being retired, they cannot make money anymore so they have to depend on the

pension

from the

government

and salary of their offspring.

First

of all, the

government

have to spend a lot of financial budget for the

pension

for retired people,

therefore

live too long can waste too much money as well as some necessary services

such

as healthcare or remission in taxes. And that makes

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lderly become the financial

burden

of the society.

Additionally

, retired people who have high longevity can

also

be the

burden

of their own family.

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by completely depending on their offspring’s salary for

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daily life’s expenses. Because elderly are able to cause a lot of different illness and do not have the strength to do everything like before so their offspring have to take care of

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100%.

However

, some possible measures can be given to solve these problems.

Firstly

, the efforts

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the

government

can be seen as the main measures. The

government

should raise the taxes for retired people in order to balance the income and outcome as well as raise the

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age from 5 to 7 years. Because of the development of

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ealthcare system nowadays, people have longer expectancy and become healthier, so raising retired age can reduce the proportion depending on

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ension.

Secondly

, families should have different actions

such

as giving elderly some gentle job to do while they still can work.

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measure can help elderly not feel bored and

also

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some parts in daily life. In conclusion, the

burden

on the family and

pension

is an unavoidable problem that will happen when people live longer after they retire.

However

, there are several appropriate approaches mentioned to deal with these problems.