Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

After graduating from high

school

, students have two options, including attending colleges or starting to work

fulltime

. Some people uphold the idea of entering a university while others disapprove it. In

this

essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my position.

To begin

with, obtaining a college degree provides students with valuable

knowledge

.

For example

, students who study in pharmaceutical areas should learn technical

knowledge

which is not possible to perceive without tutors and professors in college. It is undeniable that technically detailed jobs,

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octor, engineer, and accountant, require students to know the how-to beyond their high

school

degrees.

Hence

, entering college to become more sophisticated should

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.

On the other hand

, young students should spend time working

instead

of pursuing

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higher education.

For instance

,

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esearch found that nearly 30

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of American students who were 18 years old decided to start their

fulltime

career as

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Salesmen

, workers in the construction sites, or car engineer after high

school

.

Although

young people prefer earning to getting a degree, the experience that they accumulate over time can shed light upon what they want to achieve in the future. In short, the youth is able to potentially obtains much incredible experience by working

fulltime

after graduating from high

school

. To conclude, even though

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university

can broaden

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nowledge domains of young people, they are able to expand their wisdom through hands-on experience. In my perspective, graduating from a

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university

is far greater than working

fulltime

after high

school

because university

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students with superior

knowledge

that is

impossible to understand if they figure out by

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themselves

. In the future, I hope more young people will pursue high education after high

school

.