There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both and opine.
In today's contemporary world, advertisements play a crucial role especially for the younger generation. Nowadays,
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leaving a lasting impression on the children minds. Some people hold the opinion that these commercials motivate the
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ositive and negative effects of the advertisements.
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Modern day
TV commercials are very much aimed towards the children and their needs. Children are vulnerable, they try to blindly imbibe whatever is shown in ads. Add a hyphen
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For instance
, commercials related to junk food, sweet carbonated drinks, expensive gadgets, etc. Teens get encouraged by seeing these ads and want to buy them by any means. As a result
, children pick up unhealthy eating habits which severely affects their health in the long run. Furthermore
, on seeing l
atest electronic gadgets advertisement online, youngsters are inclined to buy lavish expensive gadgets due to peer pressure. To get their wishes fulfilled, they resort to unlawful means and follow the path of crime.
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Firstly
, kids get to learn about the
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education related
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information
. Additionally
, they get significant knowledge about the availability of various coding platforms. For example
- Byju's, White Hat Junior, etc. Also
, the different innovative and creative ads available nowadays help kids minds to blossom. Certain commercials in the middle of the game shows provide knowledgeable information
and questionnaire for children. Moreover
, there are certain ads which provides
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about food nutrient value to the kids.
To sum up, it is true that the present days
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children more in an adverse manner. Parents need to play a pivotal role in educating and teaching their children about harms of consumerism. They need to help their kids and make them understand what thing is right to imbibe and what is wrong for them. Change the verb form
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