You will be celebrating your son’s 8th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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Dear Mrs Humera, I hope you are doing well. I am very excited to invite you

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son

's 8th birthday party which will be held in

upcoming

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week on 15th May, Wednesday.

This

birthday event will be really surprising for my

son

this

time , I am planning to organise

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the

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event in the Reymond

plaza

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rather

then

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at home. My

son

always

love

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to celebrate his special day with his

freinds

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friends

and

prefer

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to have a

cake cutting

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ceremony at the house.

This

time my parents are here as they came from India recently to visit so me and my husband plan to have a

get

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together with

our loved ones to make

this

day memorable and

enjoyfull

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enjoy full

enjoyable

. As you are my close

collegue

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colleague

working with

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and have a good relationship like a family

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apply

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I was wondering if you

can

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join us on

this

occasion ,

oif

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you feel comfortable as you are staying alone here

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you will feel

good

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family atmosphere.

This

party will start

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5:00pm and will be done by 8:00 pm which will not be too late for you . I have talk about you with my family alot so they are very excited to meet you and really feel happy if you will be present here. I will really appreciate for your time and would requrest you not to spend money to buy any gift for my

son

. Your's Sincerely Gurpreet

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clarity

Ensure clarity in your sentence structure to increase overall comprehensibility, especially when detailing the event.

grammar and punctuation

Consider revising for grammatical accuracy and punctuation (e.g., comma usage, spacing issues) to enhance the readability of your invitation.

organization

It might be beneficial to organize your ideas more clearly by separating them into distinct paragraphs, making the invitation easier to follow.

purpose and tone

Excellent job in clearly stating the purpose of the letter and extending a warm invitation.

task completion

You successfully conveyed the details of the party (date, time, and location), which is crucial for the task.

tone and personal touch

The personal tone and expression of how much it would mean for your family to have the recipient at the party added a warm touch to your invitation.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

241 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

heartfelt invitation
celebrate
occasion
significance
venue
entertainment
appreciate
memorable
RSVP
reiterate
looking forward
warm closing

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