You will be celebrating your son’s 8th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party
Dear Mrs Humera,
I hope you are doing well. I am very excited to invite you event in the Reymond
on
my Change preposition
to
son
's 8th birthday party which will be held in upcoming
week on 15th May, Wednesday. Add an article
the upcoming
This
birthday event will be really surprising for my son
as this
time , I am planning to organiseAdd an article
an
the
plaza
rather Capitalize word
Plaza
then
at home.
My Replace the word
than
son
always love
to celebrate his special day with his Change the verb form
loves
freinds
and Correct your spelling
friends
prefer
to have a Correct subject-verb agreement
prefers
cake cutting
ceremony at the house. Add a hyphen
cake-cutting
This
time my parents are here as they came from India recently to visit so me and my husband plan to have a get
Add a hyphen
get-together
together with
our loved ones to make this
day memorable and enjoyfull
. As you are my close Correct your spelling
enjoy full
enjoyable
collegue
working with Correct your spelling
colleague
my
and have a good relationship like a family Correct pronoun usage
me
so
I was wondering if you Change preposition
apply
can
join us on Wrong verb form
could
this
occasion , oif
you feel comfortable as you are staying alone here Correct your spelling
if
so
you will feel Correct word choice
apply
good
family atmosphere. Correct article usage
a good
This
party will start by
5:00pm and will be done by 8:00 pm which will not be too late for you . I have talk about you with my family alot so they are very excited to meet you and really feel happy if you will be present here.
I will really appreciate for your time and would requrest you not to spend money to buy any gift for my Change preposition
at
son
.
Your's Sincerely
GurpreetSubmitted by gp04101995 on
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clarity
Ensure clarity in your sentence structure to increase overall comprehensibility, especially when detailing the event.
grammar and punctuation
Consider revising for grammatical accuracy and punctuation (e.g., comma usage, spacing issues) to enhance the readability of your invitation.
organization
It might be beneficial to organize your ideas more clearly by separating them into distinct paragraphs, making the invitation easier to follow.
purpose and tone
Excellent job in clearly stating the purpose of the letter and extending a warm invitation.
task completion
You successfully conveyed the details of the party (date, time, and location), which is crucial for the task.
tone and personal touch
The personal tone and expression of how much it would mean for your family to have the recipient at the party added a warm touch to your invitation.