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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, getting information about all around the world is required to become alert and informative about everything. Young people prefer to spend time and money with their peers
instead
 of reading a
newspaper
 or listening to the news on television.
Therefore
,
this
 essay will explain the reasons, followed by the solutions to
this
 issue. To start with, ignorance and friends are the two main reasons, which distract the youth from reading a
newspaper
 and do encourage to skip the news channels on television. Adults feel bore and lazy when it comes to the news, as news spread detailed information about each and every incident happening around the society.
For example
, local news channels share information about the robbery, kidnapping and
also
 about the pivotal methods that how to be safe at home, in
this
 surrounding.
Moreover
, teenagers love to spending time with their friends
instead
 of sitting at home and listen to the news on radio or TV. In short, young people have other priorities, top on developing an interest to know what is happening around in today’s world. To overcome
this
 issue, there should be a campaign regarding the importance of spending time on reading
newspaper
 by the government and there should be the guidance of parents too, as children have more impact of their parents. To illustrate, Worldwide Union has researched that there is 25% increment in the numbers of youth which has started to read a
newspaper
 after being a part of an awareness campaign supported by the government authorities in 2018.
In addition
, parents and grandparents should develop a habit to read a
newspaper
 in front their grandkids, which will encourage them to read or listen to the news on daily basis,
as a result
, the teens will help to create a better environment around them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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