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Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

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In the modern era, an increase in the number of stress celebrities is a major concern across the countries. With each passing day, Film stars spend a lot of time while dealing with luxurious surroundings, that really made their lives complicated, there is enough chance for improvement.
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, there is a rise and fall in freedom issues. Competition is another area where governments and private groups or individuals can share responsibility. Film stars and music celebrities are most likely to suffer stress issue at a great level. Since common citizens
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, the USA people spend more time in carrier and life balancing. In conclusion, even though time changes and people may vary in their opinions. I think only positive changes can bring more benefits.
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eally heavy price for being famous.
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