One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

Hope
this
letter reaches you in good health. I am writing to invite you to my son's 6th birthday
party
. I am planning to celebrate my son’s 6th birthday
next
week on
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th of December, and my whole family would very much wish for you to attend and enjoy the
party
at my home. To give you little idea about the schedule of the birthday
party
, we start our program at around 7'o clock with a very popular
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song, by the little school friends of my son, follow by a display of some of the old and funny videos of him from his
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infancy
. Later, some light snacks will
be serve
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to the guests which
includes
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my family members, close relatives and some close friends. At around 9.00 pm, we start the cake cutting ceremony.
Finally
, we will be serving dinner
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all the guests. Anyway, you must know how much my son really likes you, and you are his favourite Uncle as he is always happy to see you. So, please come to the
party
because it would mean a lot to my whole family. Yours Sincerely, Alex Smith
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