You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter, explain what you like about the cafeteria say what is wrong with it suggest how it could be improved
Dear sir,
I am Kailash kamble studying
in
2nd-year civil engineering. I am writing Change preposition
apply
this
letter regarding college
cafeteria facility because I am using Correct article usage
the college
this
facility since
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for
last
2 years along with my two best friends. We spend more time in a Correct article usage
the last
college
canteen for food
because we don't have another choice. The cafeteria area is very interesting and attractive along with light background music and Warm wall colours along with cartoons and caricatures makes
it more and more engaging. It is appealing for Change the verb form
make
a
young generation. Cleanliness and prompt service Correct article usage
the
is
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are
also
impressive.
However
, food
quality is not that great in the terms of teste and quantity. Many students raise this
issue regularly in complain
book but Replace the word
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still
there is no improvement. Add a comma
,still
College
Course fees along with hostel charges is
expensive for many students Change the verb form
are
hence
improvement in a system really help them at a great level. I will thankful
to you if you can solve Add a missing verb
be thankful
this
issue on priority by publishing this
review information in a magazine. I no
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know
their
are different people from Replace the word
there
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apply
culture
around the world at one place but Fix the agreement mistake
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atleast
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at least
food
quantity issue could be solved.
We spend more time in a college
canteen for food
because we don't have another choice. The cafeteria area is very interesting and attractive along with light background music and Warm wall colours along with cartoons and caricatures makes
it more and more engaging. It is appealing for Change the verb form
make
a
young generation. Cleanliness and prompt service Correct article usage
the
is
Change the verb form
are
also
impressive.
Look forward to positive improvement.
Your's faithfully,
Kailash KambleSubmitted by hKc47$p# on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite