Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Almost every day of the week you can you read stories about societies are grappling with finding the best ways to curb the rising

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rate

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. In fact,

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issue has aroused much controversy among people. It is widely believed that increasing police presence in different areas of cities will reduce criminality.

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I personally opine that other aspects of a country

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as the

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and educational

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play a more crucial role in diminishing

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rates.

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several reasons go as follows.

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and foremost, an efficient education

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can act as a deterrent to committing crimes. Indeed, school after the home is the

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minutiae which children are bringing up in.

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, children have to be taught how to behave in society and what is wrong morally.

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ducational

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will discourage committing offences by teaching children moral lessons.

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, Japan had changed its educational infrastructure in 1992 to focus more on ethical issues.

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, since 1992, its

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rate

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is decreasing by 4% annually.

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but not least, a lucrative

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provides more jobs with appropriate salaries.

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, everyone has enough amount of money to afford a good standard of living. In

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nflation

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of the

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of a country is low, the

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will be a panacea for discouraging criminality in all its forms. According to recent research conducted by the University of Toronto from 1990 until 2001, when the inflation

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of Iran

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was low, there was no incentive for

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anymore. In conclusion, I think other measurements

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as enhancing the educational

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and economics condition is more effective than increasing police presence to diminish criminality.