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Some people think that providing many TV channels is a great thing, but others think that this may affect the quality of TV programs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #tv #channels #quality #programs
The given Brandfield
city
’s map designed by
city
 planners, illustrates the two proposed locations S1 and S2, for a new shopping mall. Overall, the
first
site
 recommended is situated in the northern
city
 while the
second
site
 suggested is in the southeast of the
city
. In terms of the
first
 proposed
site
 (S1), it is located to the north of the ‘
City
 Centre’ just below the northern junction of the road and the river. The ‘Housing Estate’ could be located
on
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 the northwest direction.
Furthermore
, construction is proposed to be on the land between the west of the river, south of the road and north of the railway line. Regarding the
second
 suggested location of the shopping mall, it is almost in the southeast corner of the
city
, in the middle of the space between the road and the railway line. The ‘
City
 centre’ can be found on the northwest side while the ‘Industrial Estate’ is on the northeast of the proposed
site
.
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