Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Scott, I was very shocked to receive a

complain

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letter from you about the noise from my house flat. I am feeling very sorry about your inconvenience. Now I can imagine that great trouble. Please accept my apology from

heart

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for that. Actually, I am doing some kitchen and bathroom fitting work

since

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last

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two days and it is now taking more time than expected. I have tried hard to complete

this

within time but could not get

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success. It took lots of hammer work along with grinding and cutting. During

this

work could not

realised

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volume

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noise. But, now I will certainly hire a professional fitter to fix it and I am sure it will take not more than a day. I will complete all these activities between

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day hours so that nobody can

disturb

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. I will promise you it will not

happened

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again. Sorry for the inconvenience caused. Warm regards, Kailash Kamble.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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