Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language still could be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The arrival of
translation
software
worldwide due to the advanced technology has made many
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lives more convenient on their trips, but learning a
language
, in many people's view, play a significant role and benefits learners. I definitely opine
this
view because mastering a
language
is not only provides more opportunities for the learners but
also
the
translation
skills are impossible to be replaced by any advanced
software
. Advanced technology leads to the invention of various applications relevant to
translation
software
, and modern devices
such
as smartphones and tablets make these apps more accessible to their users.
However
, the availability of
translation
software
is unreliable and depends on many factors like
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nternet and electrical power.
For example
, the signals from internet satellites in remote regions sometimes are affected and not strong enough to make the apps work properly.
Consequently
, travellers may not always rely on
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translation
software
. Relying on travellers' own
language
capacities is more reliable as
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to
translation
software
.
Although
translation
software
worldwide has been tested before launching to the market and providing services to their users, the precise content translated by these
software
apps remains being questioned by many scholars or experts. There are so many factors that may affect or disturb these apps from functioning properly.
For instance
, the accent of the users, the layman terms, and the noise in the surroundings often affect the accuracy of the apps. These
translation
software
apps may provide a certain level of convenience to the users, but users should not rely on them totally, especially during formal situations suck as business or political negotiation.
Otherwise
, their benefit may be jeopardised by inaccurate
translation
. Learning a
language
often benefits learners based on personal situations.
First
, learners often are kept in
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right pathway and feel more active via interacting with their teachers or
language
buddies.
Moreover
, learning a new
language
may exercise the learners' brains and helps them to stay healthy physically and mentally.
Last
but not the least, once reaching
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ertain level, learners often feel content because they are able to rely on themselves to communicate with foreign peoples in their own countries or abroad during travelling.
Undoubtably
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Undoubtedly
, mastering a
language
often benefit the learners and enhances the learners' capacity. In conclusion, modern devices and advanced technology provide a wide range of
translation
software
for ordinary people to apply, but
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software
may not function precisely and reliably enough to provide excellent services.
Therefore
, learning a foreign
language
should not be replaced by
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software
and definitely benefits the learners, especially those who are experts and master the languages
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