Task 2: Some people believe that young people should spend more of their time with their families and less on entertainment outside the home. Others disagree.

Some people believed that youngsters should allocate much of their recreational

time

for their families

instead

of entertaining themselves outside. While it is true that young individuals spend their

time

virtually with family, I believe

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also

possible to expand social circle. On the one hand, there are some reasons why spend

time

with family at home is much more important .

First

of all, young people can learn traditional and ethical values in a safe way at home. The main reason for

this

argument is that family

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them

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oral message but

also

play an essential role in forming

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haracter process.

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,

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amily provide orientation for young ones to go on the right track, and

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is

also

a source of motivation and inspiration for them to keep moving forward and reach the zenith of success. So all in all family is of the most

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for the youngsters.

On the other hand

, some people utter that having a wide social circle is significantly vital.

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is due to fact that it is an excellent way to learn

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nterpersonal skill as well as improve conflict management skill and

therefore

handle life’s problem better when they enter life.

In contrast

, children who do not have much

relation ship

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apart from their family tend to be anti-social.

Furthermore

, some people feel stress out because of working in a competitive environment and put under pressure on a frequent basis.

This

is the reason why they have a habit of going out to bars, restaurants or cafe in the weekend to feel at ease and recharge their battery after a hectic schedule. In conclusion ,

although

enjoying entertainment

time

outside is extremely crucial,

time

-sharing laughs and happiness with family

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of value. I believe that young people should distribute their leisure

time

efficiently for both family and themselves.