Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to preoccupy themselves. Discuss both these views and and give your opinion.

What would be the best way to use our children's free

time

, is something that every parent can ask himself. Some may say joining some organization for

group

activities, while others may believe that would be more beneficial to let them learn by themselves how to get busy.

This

essay will illustrate both opinions and I will give mine in the end. People who believe that taking part in an organization would be a good idea for children to use their free

time

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must have thought about learning how to socialize with others .

For instance

, a

child

who has learned how to deal with friends in a

group

setting would be more successful in his life especially when the task required

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teamwork, unlike the other

child

who has never been exposed in

such

environment.

On the other hand

, those who consider that in order for their offspring to use free

time

, the

child

has to figure out by himself how to get busy, may support

this

idea with something like creativity.

For example

,when we look by our self how to get a solution to our own problems, we become more problem solving oriented and become more creative. Unlikewise, if the solution has been given to him,

then

that can create some kind of limitation on the

child

. In my opinion, while it is a good idea for children to join a

group

and learn how to socialize, sometimes

this

dynamique may have its own drawbacks

such

as some rules and restrictions established by a

group

can limit a

child

to freely think and come up with new ideas. And

this

can negatively impact his creativity and problem-solving skills. To sum up, some parent believes that children should join some organisation to implement some social skill while others think that they must find by themself what to do on their free

time

to learn problem-solving and being more creative. I believe that the

first

opinion has its disadvantage because of the limitation that can have on our children, and that we should choose wisely the

group

.