Some people think that certain prisoners showed be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behnid bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Recently, specific
crime
sentences have been argued. Some people assume that it would be better if certain offenders are engaged in voluntary
community
work
. Personally, I completely agree with
this
view because of the positive outcomes, which will be discussed in
this
essay, for the criminals themselves and the whole
society
. Regarding the criminals, since the sentences should be aligned with the
crime
itself, those who commit minor offences should not be kept with dangerous culprits.
This
is because they might be influenced by other's thoughts in violating the rules after their release from prisons.
In contrast
, while petty crimes' offenders are separated to be volunteers in
community
work
, they will reconsider their roles in
society
and what they have done before.
For instance
, it is noticed that once lawbreakers, who are punished for minor crimes
such
as reckless drive or breaking speed limit, are asked to participate in
community
work
, they seldom repeat any fraudulent activities.
Thus
, not all criminals should spend their sentences in jails. As for the
society
, with a view to curbing
crime
incidence, governments have to implement unpaid
community
work
as an alternative strategy for prisons.
This
deterrent step improves criminals' physiatric status ;
therefore
, they would not violate the rules again.
As a result
, the
crime
rate will gradually decrease. Not only does
society
benefits from reducing
crime
incidence, but it
also
indirectly benefits financially.
For example
, in Singapore, as minor criminals contribute to unpaid
work
, they replace numerous paid positions like street cleaning and farming.
Hence
, governments could not waste money on funding prisons. To conclude,
although
lawbreakers must receive harsh punishment, those who commit minor crimes ought to
work
for their communities rather than be in jails. I believe that criminals, as well as societies, will gain more from
this
unpaid
work
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