Some people think that certain prisoners showed be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behnid bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently, specific
crime
sentences have been argued. Some people assume that it would be better if certain offenders are engaged in voluntary community
work
. Personally, I completely agree with this
view because of the positive outcomes, which will be discussed in this
essay, for the criminals themselves and the whole society
.
Regarding the criminals, since the sentences should be aligned with the crime
itself, those who commit minor offences should not be kept with dangerous culprits. This
is because they might be influenced by other's thoughts in violating the rules after their release from prisons. In contrast
, while petty crimes' offenders are separated to be volunteers in community
work
, they will reconsider their roles in society
and what they have done before. For instance
, it is noticed that once lawbreakers, who are punished for minor crimes such
as reckless drive or breaking speed limit, are asked to participate in community
work
, they seldom repeat any fraudulent activities. Thus
, not all criminals should spend their sentences in jails.
As for the society
, with a view to curbing crime
incidence, governments have to implement unpaid community
work
as an alternative strategy for prisons. This
deterrent step improves criminals' physiatric status ; therefore
, they would not violate the rules again. As a result
, the crime
rate will gradually decrease. Not only does society
benefits from reducing crime
incidence, but it also
indirectly benefits financially. For example
, in Singapore, as minor criminals contribute to unpaid work
, they replace numerous paid positions like street cleaning and farming. Hence
, governments could not waste money on funding prisons.
To conclude, although
lawbreakers must receive harsh punishment, those who commit minor crimes ought to work
for their communities rather than be in jails. I believe that criminals, as well as societies, will gain more from this
unpaid work
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