An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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of people these days are meeting people online. More time is spent over the internet
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an increasing amount of people than earlier.
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the merits and demerits of
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lifestyle which is often witnessed these days and its impact on their life.
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with, due to lack of time and busy work schedule, it is difficult to stay in touch with friends and relatives so social networking sites have played a major role in keeping them connected with each other.
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, Facebook and Instagram are among very popular platforms where conversations are often conducted, and pictures are shared which keeps everyone informed about
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can be a very socializing way of updating all the connected members about the latest activity.
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, everyone can keep an eye on the other person's recent update.
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, social platforms have caused people to compare their life with others which is
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of the major causes of depression these days.
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,
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showcasing their lavish lifestyle on
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nternet can induce an inferiority complex on the other person scrolling through the newsfeed. As per the latest survey conducted by the people's forum,
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nline platform has been listed as
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of the major causes of mental health issues.
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toxicity and comparison among
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ew generation. To summarize,
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nternet has led to unite people from distances but has led to many other problems in terms of their psychological aspects.
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, it is evident that virtual togetherness cannot be considered as the ideal way of association.
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