An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
A large
amount
of people these days are meeting people online. More time is spent over the internet Change the quantifier
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This
essay will discuss on
the merits and demerits of Verify preposition usage
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such
lifestyle which is often witnessed these days and its impact on their life.
To begin
with, due to lack of time and busy work schedule, it is difficult to stay in touch with friends and relatives so social networking sites have played a major role in keeping them connected with each other. For example
, Facebook and Instagram are among very popular platforms where conversations are often conducted, and pictures are shared which keeps everyone informed about one
's activities. This
can be a very socializing way of updating all the connected members about the latest activity. Thus
, everyone can keep an eye on the other person's recent update.
On the contrary
, social platforms have caused people to compare their life with others which is one
of the major causes of depression these days. For instance
, one
showcasing their lavish lifestyle on i
nternet can induce an inferiority complex on the other person scrolling through the newsfeed. As per the latest survey conducted by the people's forum, Add an article
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nline platform has been listed as Add an article
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an
one
of the major causes of mental health issues. This
can lead to an
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ew generation.
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nternet has led to unite people from distances but has led to many other problems in terms of their psychological aspects. Add an article
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Therefore
, it is evident that virtual togetherness cannot be considered as the ideal way of association.Submitted by shubhamkaushik1711 on
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