Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. • Why could this be? • Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Watching films is a popular way to entertain. The competition between international films versus locally made films is highly dominated by one side, foreign films. The essay will analyse the root cause of

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phenomenon and explain why the

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should fund local

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industries.

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, the casts of

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are often far better compared to local actors and actresses.

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, nearly 90 per cent of Vietnamese viewers rated the Vietnamese-adapted version of Descendants of the Sun much lower than the original version made by Korean because of poor acting performance.

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the contents between two versions, internally produced series and local series, are similar, the acting of international stars

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far superior

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the local ones.

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helps to explain why people are fond of foreign series over the one made by

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producer. A possible solution which can improve the rating of

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is that the

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should provide more funding to universities which train future actors and actresses. A leading example is

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. To be more specific, they have invested billions of dollars in institutions which offer casting classes since 2000 so that Korea can produce Hollywood-equivalent casts.

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support has been paid off as Korean made movies have been consistently won internationally recognized awards,

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as Oscars. In short,

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funding is necessary for local form makers to improve

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quality. To conclude, acting performance is a reason for the fact that local viewers favour internationally made films over the local ones.

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, the

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plays an important role to financially support local firm producers. In the future, in some countries

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as Korea and Vietnam, local films will be preferred options for local viewers.