Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. • Why could this be? • Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Watching films is a popular way to entertain. The competition between international films versus locally made films is highly dominated by one side, foreign films. The essay will analyse the root cause of
this
phenomenon and explain why the
government
should fund local
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industries.
Firstly
, the casts of
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oreign
film
are often far better compared to local actors and actresses.
For example
, nearly 90 per cent of Vietnamese viewers rated the Vietnamese-adapted version of Descendants of the Sun much lower than the original version made by Korean because of poor acting performance.
Although
the contents between two versions, internally produced series and local series, are similar, the acting of international stars
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far superior
than
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the local ones.
This
helps to explain why people are fond of foreign series over the one made by
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the
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ocal
film
producer. A possible solution which can improve the rating of
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ocally made
film
is that the
government
should provide more funding to universities which train future actors and actresses. A leading example is
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orean
government
. To be more specific, they have invested billions of dollars in institutions which offer casting classes since 2000 so that Korea can produce Hollywood-equivalent casts.
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support has been paid off as Korean made movies have been consistently won internationally recognized awards,
such
as Oscars. In short,
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government
funding is necessary for local form makers to improve
film
quality. To conclude, acting performance is a reason for the fact that local viewers favour internationally made films over the local ones.
Moreover
, the
government
plays an important role to financially support local firm producers. In the future, in some countries
such
as Korea and Vietnam, local films will be preferred options for local viewers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Cinematic expertise
  • Diverse narratives
  • Enriching cultural experience
  • Linguistic proficiency
  • Cinematography advancements
  • Government subsidies
  • Promote local talent
  • Economic sustainability
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