You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

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Dear Mr Hudson, I am one

your

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tenants from Unit 2, Blaxland Rd and I wish to discuss

about

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the rental agreement for

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property. There is a recent

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change in my current family arrangement and I am afraid to advise you that we would be needing to terminate our current rental contract after 10 months

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of a year. As a matter of fact, we have recently purchased a property in a nearby suburb and all the official paperwork have been finalised. We are

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planning to move to our new house as early as

month. As I have always received outstanding customer experience from your real estate agency, I hope you will decide

this

time favourably by not charging us the termination fees for the remaining two months. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, John Smith

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

141 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

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