we are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

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rend among the people. The computers can help the
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aster pace. I think computers can play
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society. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will share
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enefits of computers
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computers
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performed
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ew microseconds. The size of the computers
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large and took so many
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to store anything. With the passage of
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, the advancement in the
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technology
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compact each and everything around us. Other than
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the human can perform any task
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seconds because there are various machines in which they are performed by various
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functions. It is not only limited to
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computer based
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technology
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reached the moon and in
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they are planning to reach every planet of
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niverse. There is no doubt that to
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can make
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erson lazy.
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thing happens with the excessive usage of
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technology
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, in the past
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, people usually do calculations without any machine or calculators they made the human brain sharp. Nowadays, students are dependent on calculators of smartphones, computers that they never try to do
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alculation on their own.
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not allow them to use their brain.
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, people become so habitual of using computers and smartphones that they spend most of their
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watching movies and using social media. By
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on the gadgets. To conclude, every
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technologies
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there are various benefits of using computers now and in
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but excessive use of anything can harm not only personal as well as professional life of the person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Artificial Intelligence (AI)
  • Machine Learning
  • Automated
  • Internet of Things (IoT)
  • Telecommuting
  • Digital Technology
  • Virtual Workplaces
  • Computer-assisted
  • Healthcare Industry
  • Reliance
  • Privacy
  • Human Interaction
  • Job Displacement
  • Automation
  • Digital Divide
  • Cybersecurity
  • Internet Safety
  • Digital Crime
  • Ethical Considerations
  • Environmental Impacts
  • E-waste
  • Carbon Footprint
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