we are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

The excessive dependency on

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technology

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as hardware, software, smartphones becomes

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rend among the people. The computers can help the

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to grow at

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aster pace. I think computers can play

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reat role in

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growth but rely on one thing can

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society. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will share

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enefits of computers

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their impact on the

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To begin

with, the advancement in computers plays a great role in taking

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orld to the

next

higher step. To clarify,

initially

computers

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performed

the calculations in a

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ew microseconds. The size of the computers

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large and took so many

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to store anything. With the passage of

time

, the advancement in the

computer

technology

compact each and everything around us. Other than

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the human can perform any task

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seconds because there are various machines in which they are performed by various

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functions. It is not only limited to

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technology

,

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reached the moon and in

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they are planning to reach every planet of

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niverse. There is no doubt that to

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can make

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erson lazy.

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thing happens with the excessive usage of

computer

technology

.

For instance

, in the past

time

, people usually do calculations without any machine or calculators they made the human brain sharp. Nowadays, students are dependent on calculators of smartphones, computers that they never try to do

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alculation on their own.

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not allow them to use their brain.

Moreover

, people become so habitual of using computers and smartphones that they spend most of their

time

watching movies and using social media. By

this

, they waste lots of their

time

on the gadgets. To conclude, every

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technologies

has its pros and cons.

Although

there are various benefits of using computers now and in

future

but excessive use of anything can harm not only personal as well as professional life of the person.