Environmental problems such as pollution and climatic variations are increasing nowadays. The governments have taken some measures at a global level. But they got only few solutions. Why is it so? How can this problem be solved?

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Saving the
environment
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has become the top priority across the
world
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. No country in the
world
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disagrees with the fact that the Earth is at the brink of a climatic disaster, but the measures taken neither have legs nor the lengths to address the issue.
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mitigate the problem. The
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reason why global measures have failed is that the developed
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is shying away from the burden it needs to bear for the damage it did to the
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in the colonial industrial revolution times.
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, we are stuck in a limbo of
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of developing nations on one side and the developed on the other. And the compromises reached between the two have always been far from satisfactory.
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if
we need to see a real positive change, the developed
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has to do more than the developing
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. lt cannot just say that everyone should play an equal role. lt can do so by providing wealth and technology related to renewable sources of energy to the developing and the least developed countries. The
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major reason
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not being able to do for the
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is that our governments are acting in the interests of powerful lobbies and corporations.
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, the fossil fuel industries are
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businesses.
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clean energy succeeds, these giants would lose. The clout of these is so strong that
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of acting with ambition and urgency, the governments are making feeble efforts. The solution, for
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would be to create awareness that fossil fuel industries have to step down to let the greener energies succeed.
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,
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and
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are always seen at loggerheads with each other.
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always ends up taking a back seat to
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, looking at the two as separate entities has delayed and brought us to our current position. The answer to
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is sustainable
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, which is
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evelopment that meets the needs of the present, without compromising the
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. To sum up, it can be seen clearly, why the steps taken so far have failed to save the
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.
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, the time has come to do some soul-searching and take pro-active steps for the
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