Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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children
TV
programs are many drawbacks. However
, other people say there are more benefits than people think. From my point of view, there are disadvantages outweigh advantages.
Presently, more and more kids love to watching
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watch
in
television and smartphone. If children watch a Verify preposition usage
on
lot
of it, it makes b
ad effect Add an article
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to
them. Even though, a large group of people think that there are benefits because many channels in televisions have not only Verify preposition usage
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cartoon
programs but also
education programs too. For example
, kids prefer to
watching Verify preposition usage
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cartoon
channels. It has one channel that kids love, it is boomberang
channel. In Correct your spelling
boomerang
this
programs have a Change the determiner
these
lot
of cartoon
types such
as adventures, comedies and knowledges
. If parents open about knowledge channels, they can learn many things in cartoons.
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
On the other hand
, more and more people argue that watching TV
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lot
of drawbacks because many children watch TV
programs too much, they watch it approximately 5-6 hours per day, so it makes them have a lot
of problems.Firstly
, they will have p
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their eyes and healths because they take a long time to focus on Verify preposition usage
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in
t
v screen, their eyes may lose sight and dry. Add an article
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Secondly
, they can addict to watch tv
, and they do not want to do anything else. Finally
, they will change about their personality and emotion like when parents want to use their children hands, they do not want to help and refuse their parents because they do not want to miss every part about c
artoon which they watching. Add an article
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Thus
, parents should have limits
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c
artoon.
To sum up, several people say watching Add an article
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TV
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children. Howsoever, others think that Verify preposition usage
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is made a lot
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