Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Several people believe that
hchildren
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children
who watch
TV
programs are many drawbacks.
However
, other people say there are more benefits than people think. From my point of view, there are disadvantages outweigh advantages. Presently, more and more kids love to
watching
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videos
in
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television and smartphone. If children watch a
lot
of it, it makes
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ad effect
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them. Even though, a large group of people think that there are benefits because many channels in televisions have not only
cartoon
programs but
also
education programs too.
For example
, kids prefer
to
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watching
cartoon
channels. It has one channel that kids love, it is
boomberang
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boomerang
channel. In
this
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programs have a
lot
of
cartoon
types
such
as adventures, comedies and
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
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. If parents open about knowledge channels, they can learn many things in cartoons.
On the other hand
, more and more people argue that watching
TV
are
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a
lot
of drawbacks because many children watch
TV
programs too much, they watch it approximately 5-6 hours per day, so it makes them have a
lot
of problems.
Firstly
, they will have
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roblem
on
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their eyes and healths because they take a long time to focus on
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v screen, their eyes may lose sight and dry.
Secondly
, they can addict to watch
tv
, and they do not want to do anything else.
Finally
, they will change about their personality and emotion like when parents want to use their children hands, they do not want to help and refuse their parents because they do not want to miss every part about
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artoon which they watching.
Thus
, parents should have
limits
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how long can they watch
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artoon. To sum up, several people say watching
TV
is a bad effect
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children. Howsoever, others think that
TV
is
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ood effect too and I believe that
TV
is made a
lot
of disadvantages for kids.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary behavior
  • unrealistic perceptions
  • creative pursuits
  • social development
  • emotional development
  • constructive content
  • screen time
  • parental guidance
  • critical thinking
  • active learning
  • age-appropriate
  • media literacy
  • family bonding
  • moderation
  • perceive
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