In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is argued that in some nations,

owing

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owning

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a

home

is considered essential for many individuals.

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essay will argue that

this

might be because of the

sense

of security and stability that

people

feel when they have a

house

, and

this

is a positive

situation

because it provides a feeling of belonging. The main reason

of

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for

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this

situation

is that

owing

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owning

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a

home

gives

people

a

sense

of security and stability.

This

is because

renting

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when renting

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a place, the future is unpredictable

,

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since prices may

raise

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rise

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from one day to another or landlords might decide to sell the

house

or use it themselves and ask the renters to leave

in

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at

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any moment.

While

owing

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their own

house

,

people

do not need to worry about these problems.

For example

, a survey carried out in the United States in 2020 concluded that around 70% of

people

that

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rented a

house

felt

unsecure

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insecure

of

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the

situation

that they were in,

while

almost 95% of individuals who had their own

home

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homes

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had a

sense

of security.

This

situation

provides a

sense

of belonging.

This

is because when

people

rent a

house

, there are many restrictions, and activities that they are not allowed to carry out,

such

as decorations, buying and changing

furnitures

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furniture

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pieces of furniture

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. So

people

might live in an environment in which they do not feel like "

home

".

On the other hand

,

owing

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owning

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their own

house

,

people

are allowed to do what they like, decorating and constructing their

house

in the way that they always wanted, since the

house

is theirs.

For instance

, during the

last

years

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years,

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people

who owned a

home

were very excited to change and buy new furniture to have their dream houses. In conclusion,

owing

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owning

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a

house

,

let

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people

feel secure and stable,

as well as

a

sense

of belonging, and I

therefore

, believe that

this

is a positive

situation

.