Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Environmental damage is on its peak since
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ast decade. If the
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pper hand in improving the
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while Individuals can play their role as well.In
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essay I will discuss what roles should be played by Individual; ministry and large scale Institute. Before any organization/Government, an individual should have some responsibilities to bring change in the
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nvironment is caused by an
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wastage;Individuals should make habit of using less
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nvironment is air pollution, a study has proved that the drastic change in
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in Carbon Monoxide caused by automobile vehicles.Individuals should restrict themselves from using vehicles
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.Overall every person has
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esponsibility to make the
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better as well. The government have
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nvironment by imposing strict rules for Large scale industries as well as for individuals.
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overnment of Canada has imposed a
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government should deliver important guidelines to
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making industries which have to be followed without fail. Restrictions should implement for individuals in excess usage of
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as well as vehicles by
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inistry . To summarize,
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overnment and larger scale can improve
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nvironment while
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ndividual cannot do anything.I partially agree with the above statement since Government and Large organization has
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nvironment while individual
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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