In the future, people may have to live on other planets. Some think that is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Now a days
a lot of Correct the word
Nowadays
study
is being done to explore the existence of Change to a plural noun
studies
life
on planets other than Earth and various governments of different countries are funding a huge amount of finances to do this
research
. Although
,
some people believe that it is crucial to spend the Remove the comma
apply
money
on doing study related to e
xistence of Add an article
the
life
on other heavenly bodies , I disagree with this
statement because the idea of life
on other planets is still a theoratical
concept. Correct your spelling
theoretical
Money
spent on the analysis leads to the stagnant economy and hampers the development of the country.
Firstly
, even today the possibility of life
on other planets like Mars is an imaginary concept . For more than a century , many nations are spending a huge budget on research
and launching the expensive satellites in the space. But till today they could not find any hard evidence to support life
on anywhere else other than Mother Earth . For instance
, Although
researchers have been able to find small traces of water on Mars , but
they could not justify the existence of rocks and Remove the conjunction
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non
Add a hyphen
non-existance
existance
of Correct your spelling
existence
a
tmosphere which are vital for Add an article
the
an
s
urvival of the human Add an article
the
life
.
As a lot of finances are spent on research
, there are some industrialized nations and many developing countries where people could not afford basic ameneties
of Correct your spelling
amenities
life
such
as food , shelter . Due to o
verspending of Add an article
the
money
on s
tudy of space , even the infrastructure of the country is not developed .Add an article
the
For example
in India, there are many families who are destitute and their kids have to sleep empty stomach every night which leads to m
ajor problem of malnutrition in children . Add an article
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Also
according to California Housing Survey , n
umber of homeless people in San Francisco is increasing at Change the article
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ate of 5% every year .
To conclude , I believe that Add an article
a
the
instead
of spending money
on research
to find the survival of life
on other planets , Goverment
should consider the development of Correct your spelling
Government
n
ation as priority and Add an article
the
a
money
obtained from taxes, revenue should be spent on building the fine infrastructure of the country as there are tons of people who are deprived of daily necessities of life
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