Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Dear sir, I'm writing
this
letter with regards to the article about
Melbourne
you published in your newspaper on January 3rd, 2021. I'm a
Melbourne
resident, living in Braybrook for the past fifteen years. I finished my studies at Victoria University and working in a local convenience store. I know
Melbourne
city, especially Braybrook city very well. In the article you published
last
week, you discussed the attractions and facilities in
western
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suburbs of
Melbourne
. All most
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of all
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all
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the
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details you provided are accurate and will be helpful for the people who want
explore
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the western suburbs of the city, but you mentioned that Southercross
Archery
club
is on Ashley street which is actually located on Ballarat road. As a member of that
archery
club
,I know the locations of that
club
in
Melbourne
. There is no
archery
club
on Ashely street. As your newspaper is popular and people follow your articles, I believe providing wrong information will mislead readers and
also
affect your reputation. I would really appreciate
If
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you can publish an article about
archery
clubs and correct the mistake you published
last
time. Thanks for giving your attention to
this
complaint. Yours faithfully Dheeraj
Submitted by dheerajsudarsanam on

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