Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.
Dear sir,
I'm writing
this
letter with regards to the article about Melbourne
you published in your newspaper on January 3rd, 2021. I'm a Melbourne
resident, living in Braybrook for the past fifteen years. I finished my studies at Victoria University and working in a local convenience store. I know Melbourne
city, especially Braybrook city very well.
In the article you published last
week, you discussed the attractions and facilities in western
suburbs of Correct article usage
the western
Melbourne
. All most Change preposition
of all
all
details you provided are accurate and will be helpful for the people who want Correct determiner usage
the
explore
the western suburbs of the city, but you mentioned that Southercross Fix the infinitive
to explore
Archery
club
is on Ashley street which is actually located on Ballarat road. As a member of that archery
club
,I know the locations of that club
in Melbourne
. There is no archery
club
on Ashely street.
As your newspaper is popular and people follow your articles, I believe providing wrong information will mislead readers and also
affect your reputation. I would really appreciate If
you can publish an article about Correct pronoun usage
it If
archery
clubs and correct the mistake you published last
time. Thanks for giving your attention to this
complaint.
Yours faithfully
DheerajSubmitted by dheerajsudarsanam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite